Clancy-Gilroy
2022-05-23 01:04:07
Pour reformuler une lettre de motivation
Un vrai bilingue à l'écrit pas un jean 15/20 en l2
Je lache 5 boulasse y'as même pas une page
Clancy-Gilroy
2022-05-23 01:07:34
Le 23 mai 2022 à 01:05:27 :
Je peux essayer de t'aider
Je pose ça la au pire attend merci
Subject: Application letter for the data science Master's degree of XXX university
Dear Sir or Madam,
After completing a bachelor's degree at your university, it is with great enthusiasm that I am applying for the DS master's degree.
During my bachelor's, I was able to explore different fields of computer science. I have always been attracted to creativity inside work and it that same creativity that led my research of a Msc program. It’s expression could only be done through a field that offers new possibilities and where many things are still to be accomplished. I wish to start company’s and give meaning to my creations. It is with great interest that I am looking at data sciences.
Integrating your training would allow me to obtain essential theoretical skills in order to accomplish these projects. I have always had a passion for engineering. Since I could not make a choice between this passion and my interest toward science, I am very motivated to learn how to use science to solve concrete problems
By discussing with an engineer, I made sure of the professional viability of this field and the relevance of the teaching given. It is thus armed with motivation and this new confidence that I would like to convince you that my profile has all the assets required to succeed in your training.
I have put a lot of effort during my degree, ranking high among my peers. I have a solid base of knowledge over many field of theoretical and pratical computer science thank’s to all the courses that I have been taught. I have successfully mastered the fundamentals in all areas of computer science, especially in mathematics, algorithmic, langage theory, and database modeling. My English skills will also be an important asset to follow the ??. Eventually, my professional experience allows me to draw a realistic picture of the job market and the different opportunities that will present themselves to me.
I am asking you today to let me seize these opportunities by offering me the possibility to learn. I would be honored to join your training and look forward to your response.
Yours faithfully,
C'est une version traduite auto la je corrige au fur et a mesure, c'est dégeulasse là, déjà je sais pas comment traduire formation au sens master et entreprendre au sens entreprenariat
CaptainVlad
2022-05-23 01:28:22
J'ai lu en diagonale, y'a pas mal de fautes, suis sur mobile j'ai la flemme de t'aider, relis toi bien et garde le topic en vie, je regarderai demain si j'y pense.